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Commission: Mewbreon by Fyrrea Commission: Mewbreon by Fyrrea
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A long awaited commission for Mewbreon from Flight Rising. 
Sorry for the long wait, didn't expect that my internship would be so exhausting. I hope you like the result! 
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Critique by DanBudd DanBudd/critique/1269943567">Jul 17, 2015, 9:19:15 AM
This piece has some very nice qualities that shine through because of the somewhat obviously painted appearance. The fabrics on the main character look fantastic due to the execution of the lighting and shadowing of the folds, wrinkles, etc. Also by simplifying the background to very basic colors and shapes the character in the front really pops out, showing off the main focal point of the piece nicely. Plus personally the messy, painterly look is just comforting to look at, the values are nicely blended and the atmosphere feels softer due to this. However, if I had to say some negatives there would be two things that could be thrown in. One is that, however nice a painted picture can be, sometimes parts of the painting come of as messy or unreadable (one example is the right horn, antler thing because its so darkly lit it become hard to read). Other than that the only other negative thing I would have to say is that the odd green red mass in the top right corner in the background is very odd. It just seems out of place and is actually slightly distracting to the eye because the hood of the figure is red and by making this thing green your eye naturally wants to look there because of the two colors complimentary relationship. Overall this piece is still very nice in portraying an interesting character and makes the viewers want to know a little more about whats behind the hood.
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Fire-Link Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2016
Nice work. How's things going?
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:iconfyrrea:
Fyrrea Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! I'm fine, but a little busy with work and life... How are you?
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Fire-Link Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2016
About the same as you.
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:iconfluffyfoxend:
FluffyfoxEnd Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2016  Student Digital Artist
It´s soo cool!
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:iconfyrrea:
Fyrrea Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! :) 
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Espectacularrr Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Very story-book-esque.. did that make sense? Ugh. Anyway, beautiful!
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Fyrrea Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :hug:
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CameronKobe Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hi there!  I'm here from Comment Tag, with the word content.  I've interpreted the word here to mean "something that is contained", and chose this image because the content is intriguing and has a feeling of narrative, and because the binding around the eyes gives the impression of something contained.

I don't know anything about Flight Rising (except that I googled it just now and it looks like a game for making custom dragons) so I'll stick to my interpretation based on what I can see.

This is a really interesting and eye-catching piece depicting a dragon, eyes covered, reaching for some kind of pendant.  The penant appears to be imbued with some kind of power, casting its own light.  The dragon, blind and hooded, is reaching for the pendant, either because it's controlling it, or wants to take it.  Either way, it seems clear that the dragon has some mysterious ability to sense the power of this object without sight.  (Or perhaps the pendant is just very hot!)

The brushwork is fluid and with a strong sense of motion and texture.  I like the way you've portrayed depth in this piece using contrast, saturation, and varying levels of sharpness.  The colour palette radiates light and heat, and gives an overall warm image to the piece.  You feel that this is a good-hearted character.

There are a couple of things I would suggest for improvement: firstly, the edging around the pendant seems slightly off in terms of perspective.  The upper-right corner in particular appears to bulge in a way that makes the pendant appear to be floating.  

The second suggestion would be to add texture to the dragon's skin.  Dragons aren't really my speciality but I know they're supposed to be scaly, and I don't really see that here.

This is a beautiful piece, and a fine addition to your outstanding gallery.  All of your artwork is eye-popping in terms of originality and skill of execution.  Really well done :star: :clap:

The next person in the tagline is darknightwolf2010 and your tag word is tail.


As a final note, I wanted to give an honourable mention to your below two pieces, which I also considered for the word "content"...these little guys are certainly contented.  And adorable!
Labrador puppies are too cute by Fyrrea  Sugar, cuteness, sweetness - Kaja the Lab Puppy by Fyrrea
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Fyrrea Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! I was wondering all the time what is wrong with the perspective here, playing with "free transform" tool for a long long time and still was not happy with it :) I'll try to play with it more and maybe it can be corrected on this stage. Guess I'll just have to learn at least the basics of perspective some day :) 
Have an awesome day and thank you again! 
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CameronKobe Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're very welcome--glad it was useful! :star: :)
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SpiritDragonTano Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2015  Student General Artist
Looks amazing :D
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:iconfyrrea:
Fyrrea Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! :la:
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SpiritDragonTano Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2015  Student General Artist
You're very welcome :D
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coaste Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the texture and lighting in this <3
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Fyrrea Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :) 
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bigbubbleHL Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
omg 0.0 a masterwork *speachless*
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:iconfyrrea:
Fyrrea Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
*blushes*
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bigbubbleHL Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
^-^<3
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Valrunie Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2015  Student General Artist
Amazing :heart:
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:iconfyrrea:
Fyrrea Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :la:
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AlisterThatchel Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
An absolutely beautiful piece, well done :clap::la::clap:
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:iconfyrrea:
Fyrrea Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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AlisterThatchel Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome :la::hug:
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7heShadowWolf Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is incredible!!! I'd love to compliment this piece more but I don't know where to start--it's so amazing!!!
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:iconfyrrea:
Fyrrea Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww thank you! :) 
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7heShadowWolf Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem, your art is truly amazing!! :D
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XxLovelyPunkxX Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Love it!!
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:iconfyrrea:
Fyrrea Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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ilovezombiesxxx Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Wow! Great work hun! What internship are you doing?
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Fyrrea Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! 
Doctor internship. For 13 months young doctors freshly after the studies have to work in different parts of the hospital to learn the practical side of some most popular specialisations. And now I'm doing internal medicine (one week left) and I'm so happy it ends soon, because it's so tiring emotionally... And the next one is pediatry and then I finish the internship ^^ 
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ilovezombiesxxx Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Wow! That's  amazing. It sounds like its really intense and a lot of work. I'm glad your still finding time for art through.😁
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Fyrrea Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :heart: 
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RRRAX Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015  Student Digital Artist
moim zdaniem robi wrażenie (: światło sie bardzo fajnie układa, ogółem niesamowicie mi sie podoba wykonanie. Cała ta tekstura, to rozmycie w tle. Jest super!
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Fyrrea Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Cieszę się :) Ja tam zadowolona nie jestem z kompozycji i coś mi nie gra w perspektywie, ale dopsz że chociaż coś wyszło na plus :D No i klient zadowolony, a to najważniejsze :D 
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RRRAX Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2015  Student Digital Artist
no, to jest najważniejsze :) a następnym razem na pewno też wyjdzie lepiej
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stalker034 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
amazing !
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:iconfyrrea:
Fyrrea Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! :3
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stalker034 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
:) (Smile) 
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BlackFoxAsakura Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015
Wow, wygląda świetnie i wspaniale. Coś cudnego po prostu.
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:iconfyrrea:
Fyrrea Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Dziękuję! :)
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BlackFoxAsakura Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2015
Proszę^^
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Scarlet-Fog Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
fajowe kolorki :D
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